finalised copy changes as per gel review

locales/en/newappeal.json

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     "about-you-communication-disclaimer-label": "Communication will be by email. Contact us if you would prefer postal communication.",
     "new-appeal-progress-nav-label": "Progress",
     "new-appeal-documentlist-nav": "Documents needed",
-    "new-appeal-introduction-paragraph": "This form is to appeal against a decision to refuse a planning application, against a decision to grant an application subject to conditions to which you object, or against the failure of the Local Planning Authority to give a decision within the appropriate period, not including Householder applications.",
-    "new-appeal-introduction-warning-paragraph": "WARNING: Your appeal must reach Planning and Environment Decisions Wales within 6 months of the date of the Local Planning authority’s decision notice. (NOTE: If any of the “Essential supporting documents” are not received by us within the appeal period, the appeal will not be accepted).",
+    "new-appeal-introduction-paragraph": "This form is to appeal against:",
+    "new-appeal-introduction-paragraph-bullet-one": "a decision to refuse a planning application",
+    "new-appeal-introduction-paragraph-bullet-two": "the failure of the Local Planning Authority to give a decision with 8 weeks",
+    "new-appeal-introduction-paragraph-two": "It does not include Householder applications.",
+    "new-appeal-introduction-warning-paragraph": "You must:",
+    "new-appeal-introduction-warning-bullet-one": "submit your appeal within 6 months of the date of the Local Planning Authority's decision notice",
+    "new-appeal-introduction-warning-bullet-two": "provide all essential supporting documents within the appeal period",
     "new-appeal-development-description-hint": "Enter details of the proposed development from the planning application form. If the application was revised while it was with the LPA enter details of the revised scheme and enclose a copy of the LPA’s agreement to the change.",
-    "new-appeal-ownership-hint": "We need to know who owns the appeal site. If you do not own the appeal site or if you own only part of it, we need to know the name(s) of the owner(s) or part owner(s). We also need to be sure that the other owner(s) know that you have made an appeal. Please refer to the guidance notes on completing this section.",
+    "new-appeal-ownership-hint": "We need to know who owns the appeal site or part of it, and that all owners know you have made an appeal. Use the guidance notes to complete this section.",
     "new-appeal-ownership-option-NA": "Not applicable",
-    "new-appeal-ownership-option-A": "Certificate A - (If you are the sole owner of the whole appeal site, certificate A applies). I certify that, on the day 21 days before the date of this appeal, nobody except the appellant, was the owner (see the guidance leaflet for a definition) of any part of the land to which the appeal relates",
+    "new-appeal-ownership-option-A": "Certificate A - (for sole owners of the appeal site). I certify that, on the day 21 days before the date of this appeal, nobody except the appellant, was the owner (see the guidance leaflet for a definition) of any part of the land to which the appeal relates",
     "new-appeal-ownership-option-B": "Certificate B - I certify that the appellant (or the agent) has given the requisite notice (see the guidance leaflet) to everyone else who, on the day 21 days before the date of this appeal, was the owner (see the guidance leaflet for a definition) of any part of the land to which the appeal relates, as listed below:",
     "new-appeal-ownership-option-CD": "Certificates C and D - If you do not know who owns all or part of the appeal site, complete either Certificate C or Certificate D at Annexe 1 of our guidance and attach it to the appeal form",
     "new-appeal-agricultural-hint": "We also need to know whether the appeal site forms part of an agricultural holding. Please select either (a), (b)(i) or (b)(ii)",